11 ספט 2012
ספטמבר 11, 2012

Writing – upgrade a paragraph

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"Everything!" Susana shouted angrily. She looked quietly at Charlie for a long second and shook slowly her head. That she picked up her fancy suitcase, and moved sadly toward the hotel's old, large door. When she reached the door, she turned her head toward poor Charlie and looked again at him. "I loved you, Charlie," she said softly. "but you are not the gentle kind man I used to thought you were".

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